The Red Dye Descriptive Writing.

In todays lesson we had learned about interesting things and talking about them. We were then set a task to write about the pouring of the food colouring into a cup of water. We written about it using descriptive writing. By looking at the cup and the red dye you would come up with a good descriptive story.

‘The red crimson fluid that looked blood red poured into the water. The essence of the fluid had exploded into a bright smoky red mixture that soon died down to cover the whole of the water in the red oblivion.’